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Wow.... I got a review for Redhand that was better written than my story! And she's praising my style!

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Yay! I don't believe it was better written than your story, though. :)
This is it:
"Ah, girl, this is one of the best stories I've ever read - and I don't even like fantasy, Harry Potter aside. Kathy Ann, this book leaps and glows and jumps and twirls - okay, you've got the picture. Sob! Sob! Why can't I write like this and I call myself a writer?

Naia is very matured for a 19 year old. The picture you have created, the background to her adventures is grounded with love, strength and pragmatism. The danger of the released demon is not really a menace - that's how it comes across to me. Having said that, the stage is set for adventures, lessons, pain, suffering, discovery of strength, love etc.
Why isn't this published as yet? It's beautiful and I can visualise the film already. As I said, and I called myself a writer. I dare not any more. Thanks alot, Kathy Ann. I can't wait to read the book."
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That's much more playful, lively, and colorful than my writing!
That is a lovely review! Congratulations!